The Traditional Publishing Package
You’ve written your novel, but it’s not ready for the world yet.
This package takes your rough draft and turns it into a polished, agent-ready manuscript. I guide you step by step: refining your story, sharpening your characters, and perfecting your plot until your book shines.
Then we package it for submission: a standout query letter, the right title, compelling comps, and positioning that makes your manuscript impossible to ignore.
Write your novel. Polish it. Get it in front of agents. Let’s make it happen.
“Working with Bonnie has been a game-changer for my writing, from the first developmental edit to the last dot on the proofread. I couldn’t ask for a better person to work with.”
— CAROLINE JAMES, #1 Bestselling Romance Author
What’s included in this package?
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The developmental edit dives deep into your manuscript’s structure, pacing, plot, setting, and character arcs so every scene, chapter, and emotional beat works together to deliver maximum impact.
You’ll receive:
A strategic editorial letter from a former Big Five editor detailing what’s working, what’s holding your story back, and how to fix it.
Targeted in-text manuscript comments guiding you step by step through key big-picture changes.
A clear revision path showing exactly how to strengthen your story’s foundation and themes and bring them to life on the page.
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This stage makes your story irresistible to read. The line-level edit refines your writing without losing your voice or creative spark. Every sentence is polished for rhythm, clarity, and emotional impact so your prose flows effortlessly and keeps agents and editors hooked.
You’ll receive:
A full sentence-by-sentence edit using Tracked Changes to tighten structure, enhance pacing, and remove distractions.
Refined dialogue and tone that sound natural, consistent, and true to your characters.
Sharper, smoother prose that amplifies your voice while meeting the expectations of discerning agents and editors.
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Positioning your book in the right context is key to catching an agent’s attention, and comps are the fastest way to do it. We identify two or three works—books, TV shows, or cultural touchpoints—that capture the tone, emotional energy, and setting of your story.
You’ll receive:
A carefully curated list of comparable titles showing agents exactly where your book fits in the market.
Guidance on framing your story in submissions so agents can see its potential audience.
Insights into current trends and cultural references to make your comparisons timely and relevant.
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Your title and hook are your book’s first impression and often the deciding factor in whether agents lean in or scroll past. We craft a combination that grabs attention immediately and positions your story to stand out.
You’ll receive:
A compelling, market-aware title that captures your book’s essence and sparks curiosity.
A magnetic story hook designed to make agents say, “I need to read this.”
Professional guidance on positioning your book so it resonates with your ideal audience and stands out in its genre.
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Your opening chapters are often your first and only chance to engage an agent. We give them an extra round of editorial polish so every sentence works to draw readers in from page one.
You’ll receive:
An in-depth line-level review highlighting opportunities to strengthen interiority, tension, and character engagement.
Targeted feedback on opening lines to make your story’s voice, tone, and stakes shine immediately.
Recommendations for small but powerful tweaks that make your opening chapters impossible to put down.
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Your synopsis is more than a summary. It’s your story’s sales pitch in narrative form. We craft a clear, compelling synopsis that captures your plot, stakes, and emotional arc, making it irresistible to agents and editors.
You’ll receive:
A tight, professionally structured synopsis clearly conveying plot, character arcs, and key themes.
Guidance on highlighting your book’s unique voice and selling points to help it stand out in a crowded market.
Strategic advice on what to include and what to leave out so every word earns its place.
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Your query letter is your first impression and often the key to getting an agent interested. We craft a tailored query that captures your story’s essence and positions your book as a must-read.
You’ll receive:
A professionally written query letter designed to grab attention in seconds.
Guidance on highlighting your book’s unique selling points, genre, and target audience.
Insights on structure, tone, and pacing to make your query clear, persuasive, and impossible to ignore.
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Your author bio is more than a brief introduction. It’s your chance to position yourself as a credible, professional, and compelling storyteller. We craft a bio that showcases your voice, experience, and story behind the story.
You’ll receive:
A professionally written bio tailored for agent submissions, publisher queries, and media opportunities.
Guidance on highlighting your credentials, achievements, and writing journey without oversharing.
A version that balances personality with professionalism to give agents and editors the right impression at a glance.
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Submitting to agents can feel overwhelming, but the right guidance helps you get your manuscript into the right hands with confidence. This deep dive equips you with tools, strategies, and insider knowledge.
You’ll learn:
How to identify reputable agents, recognise red flags, and understand what a great agent can do for your career.
How to interpret agent responses, from rejections to revise-and-resubmits to offers of representation.
How to manage multiple agents showing interest, including understanding pre-empt offers and auctions.
Step-by-step strategies, real-world examples, and actionable next steps to move from aspiring author to represented writer.
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Targeting the right agents with a clear plan is key to getting noticed. Together, we create a tailored strategy so your manuscript lands in the hands of agents most likely to champion your work.
You’ll receive:
A curated shortlist of agents who represent books like yours, combining established and emerging talent.
Guidance on timing submissions, including when agents are open and how to batch submissions for maximum impact.
Insights on submission strategy so each query is sent strategically rather than all at once.
Recommendations on following up professionally and managing multiple interests while maintaining control of your process.
Who is this package for?
Writers with a finished draft who know it isn’t “agent-ready” and are tired of guessing what to fix, revise, or cut to make their story truly publishable.
Writers who’ve revised themselves in circles, who feel the story almost works but can’t figure out why the pacing drags, the characters fall flat, or the plot never fully clicks.
Writers overwhelmed by the query process, unsure how to pitch their book, choose comps, or position their story so agents actually pay attention.
A look into the process
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Step One: Submit Your Full Draft
Start by sending over your completed manuscript. I’ll dive deep into your story to identify strengths, gaps, and opportunities. Together, we’ll refine your plot, tighten your pacing, and elevate your characters so your manuscript meets the professional standards agents expect.
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Step Two: Refine and Polish Your Manuscript
Through a comprehensive developmental edit and in-depth line-level editing, your story will transform from a rough draft into a polished, agent-ready manuscript. We’ll ensure your narrative, voice, point of view, and style shine, while every plot thread and emotional arc hits its mark.
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Step Three: Prepare Your Submission Materials
Once your manuscript is polished, we craft the essential components for submission: a compelling query letter, a synopsis that sells, standout comps, and a strong title and hook. You’ll also receive a tailored agent shortlist and a submission strategy designed to maximise your chances of landing representation.
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Step Four: Submit and Stand Out
Walk away ready to submit with confidence. Your manuscript will be fully polished, your pitch materials ready, and your submission plan clear. You’ll know exactly how to present your story to agents so it stands out, and you’ll be positioned to take the next step toward traditional publication.
From rough draft to agent-ready manuscript
Get the complete Traditional Publishing Package for £4,500 GBP | $6,200 USD
Payment plans available
What Authors Are Saying
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“I can’t recommend Bonnie enough. She’s so professional and informative. I know my books are the best versions of themselves because of her attention to detail, and I’m incredibly excited to work with Bonnie again! She’s the best!!”
LAUREA MATTHEWS
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“Bonnie is wonderful. She’s professional and knowledgable, with a passion like no other. She looked after my characters and their story like they were her own. I already have another project booked in with more to come her way.”
ELLIE WHITE
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“Bonnie is insightful and a brilliant collaborator, from helping to hone the initial concept right through to the editing process. A little over four months ago, this book did not exist. I’m so grateful to her for starting its journey.”
EVA GLYN
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“Working with Bonnie has been a game-changer for my writing. She shapes and tones the story but ensures that my voice remains authentic. I couldn’t ask for a better person to work with, and I have no hesitation in recommending this brilliant editor.”
CAROLINE JAMES
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“Working with Bonnie was one of the best decisions I’ve made for my novel. She has an evocative way of viewing writing, and a passion for understanding characters. She wants you to succeed and it’s evident in her work. I regret not finding Bonnie sooner!”
IZZA MALIK
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“My experience was amazing. Bonnie’s feedback was insightful, detailed, and helped me to add real depth to my story. I really felt her passion for the novel, and that she truly wanted the best out of it. I feel like I have someone cheering me on as an author!”
CATHERINE ROSE
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“The Forever Queen won 1st place at the 2025 BookFest Awards. Bonnie’s editorial contributions to the book truly made all the difference. I appreciate her help so much.”
S.T. FERNANDEZ
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“Working with Bonnie was a dream and she far exceeded my expectations. I picked up things I will carry over into my future writing, and the way she refined my work had me so excited to share it. Bonnie is the only editor I’ll be using. So long as she wants me!”
LEILA THORNE
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“Bonnie’s feedback was spot-on and detailed, and she captured my characters’ essence perfectly. She’s extremely professional and never once left me without an answer. Every time I open the manuscript, I’m reminded how happy I am that we’re working together.”
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“Would I work with Bonnie again? A million times yes! Bonnie was the BEST editor that I could’ve asked for. She really puts her clients first and is willing to cater to what they picture for their final draft.”
LEXI MONROE
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“Every indie author needs a Bonnie in their life! Working with her was incredible—she’s informative and very knowledgeable about the publishing industry. She has gone so far above and beyond my expectations, and it’s been an utter joy from start to finish.”
NICOLE HART
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“Bonnie is one of the most amazing editors I’ve ever worked with. So quick and thoughtful, and just fun to work with. She’s a rising star in the book industry.”
PATRICIA ADRIAN
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“Bonnie is fantastic. She has such a talent for pulling out just what an author needs! I was blown away by her incredibly kind constructive criticism and she solved some of my biggest concerns. Five stars on that alone.”
FAYE HOLLAND
Paranormal & Dark Romance Author
Add-on editorial services to take your book to the next level
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Copyedit
This is your ultimate polish. A copyedit doesn’t just correct grammar; it refines language, sharpens clarity, and ensures your prose flows like a bestseller. Every sentence is optimised so readers stay engaged from first word to last.
£1,500 GBP | $2,200 USD
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Proofread
After your copyedit, this is the finishing touch that catches every typo, formatting glitch, or small error before your book hits the market. It’s the difference between a book that looks professional and one that feels rushed.
£1,000 GBP | $1,500 USD
Frequently Asked Questions
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A Line Edit focuses on your writing sentence by sentence, smoothing flow, sharpening word choice, and ensuring your voice is consistent.
It helps you:
Create smooth, readable sentences with rhythm and clarity
Fix awkward phrasing and repetitive language
Strengthen dialogue and character voice
Ensure your manuscript is polished to professional standards
By the end, your story won’t just read well—it will feel irresistible to agents and editors from the first page to the last.
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The listed values are based on industry-standard rates from the Editorial Freelancers Association (EFA)—the same rates top UK and US fiction editors charge for professional editorial work.
This package is unique because it combines multiple editorial services in one seamless process. You receive Big Five–level guidance on story structure, pacing, character development, and submission strategy without having to work with separate editors or pay multiple invoices. The result is a professionally prepared manuscript with maximum value and efficiency.
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While no editor—or package—can promise representation, this package gives your manuscript the very best chance of being noticed. Every element—from your developmental edit and line edit to your query letter, synopsis, comps, and submission strategy—is designed to position your story professionally, highlight its unique strengths, and make it irresistible to the right agents.
My role is to ensure your work is polished, market-ready, and strategically presented, so when the right agent sees it, it has the strongest possible chance of success.
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Yes! I understand this is an investment in your writing, which is why I offer flexible payment options. A 50% booking payment secures your slot, with the remaining balance due midway through the project.
Flexible four-month payment plans are also available on request. All plans begin with an upfront booking payment to reserve your place, and work begins once this is received. Manuscripts are not delivered until payment is complete.
If you’d like guidance on which option might suit you best, just get in touch. I’m happy to talk it through with you. I limit the number of authors I work with each year to ensure every project receives my full attention, so your booking secures both your place and my dedicated time.
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A Developmental Edit looks at the big picture of your manuscript—plot, pacing, character arcs, structure, and overall story impact.
It helps you:
Clarify and strengthen your story vision
Tighten pacing and structure
Deepen and refine characters
Avoid costly rewrites later
Prepare your manuscript for publishing or submission
Essentially, it ensures your story is structurally strong, emotionally engaging, and ready to impress agents or publishers.
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A literary agent is your advocate in the publishing world. They:
Know the industry inside out
Have relationships with editors at major publishing houses
Understand what it takes to get a manuscript noticed
Most traditional publishers do not accept unsolicited submissions, so an agent is essential to open doors. They also negotiate contracts, protect your rights, and maximise your book’s commercial potential.
With this package, I guide you through the entire querying process—crafting a compelling query letter, preparing submission materials, and targeting the right agents—giving your manuscript the best chance to secure representation.
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A query letter is often your first—and sometimes only—opportunity to capture a literary agent’s attention. It’s a one-page pitch that clearly conveys:
Your manuscript’s premise, genre, and audience
What makes your story unique
Its commercial potential
A strong query letter helps you make a compelling first impression, encourage agents to request your full manuscript, and move one step closer to representation. With my guidance, your query will be polished, persuasive, and professional.
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Comparable titles, or “comps”, are published works similar to yours in genre, tone, or audience. Including them in your query shows agents you understand your market and can position your book effectively.
Well-chosen comps demonstrate that you:
Know your target audience
Understand the publishing landscape
Can strategically place your book alongside similar titles
Comps give your query a professional edge and make it easier for agents to envision your book’s potential success.